Monday, January 12, 2009
Wow Trina, great job. Your notes are full of facts, there isn't any useless information getting in the way. I really enjoyed reading about Obama, he is definitely someone to research if you want to broaden the information your gathering. Also, wonderful job responding to each post, each one is thoughtful and reflects nicely back on the article. Your hard work really paid off.
Alex G's 3rd responce
These articles were really good, I loved the variety and all the information on fuel and how to get better fuel to use. My favorite was the one about Obama and how he wants to raise everything up, and make it better. I think that was a really interesting article to read and think about. Thinking all that could change in 3 years is really neat and hopefully it will happen. I bet there are a lot of articles about this in newspapers and magazines.
Aimee Response Reflection
Katrina, I like that you have factual information ( as in dealing with numbers) as well as non factual information. I also like how you have an article on Augusta, I like that you included our state into your blog. You also have an article on Obama! I can maybe use that for my information. Your blog is extremely well organized and neat. Maybe personalizing your notes a little bit more would be good.
Alex Hadik- In Class Response
Katrina-
This is an incredible blog. You are finding some great information. There is really nothing that I can say you should improve. I really like how you have taken your notes. Personally, I can comprehend information when it is listed in that manner. No personal opinions, no interpretations, just the facts. You leave your opinions for your response which is also superb. If I am to get very critical of your blog to find any reason to give you an 85 over a 95, it would lie within the responses. They are great interpretations and really an amazing piece of work but some very simple grammatical errors or perhaps assumed information do find their way in. This really is a non-problem however since it in now way detracts from your blog as a whole. If I were you, I would perhaps check out the Cape Wind Project for an article. I'm not sure that you will find any recent information but it might be a good place to find some background information. Also, check out what is happening in France as far as nuclear power is concerned and look into Holland for wind power. It might be interesting to find how the governments of these countries have better supported the development of sustainable fuels as compared to America and the Bush Administrations apparent inaction as a whole to the issue.
This is an incredible blog. You are finding some great information. There is really nothing that I can say you should improve. I really like how you have taken your notes. Personally, I can comprehend information when it is listed in that manner. No personal opinions, no interpretations, just the facts. You leave your opinions for your response which is also superb. If I am to get very critical of your blog to find any reason to give you an 85 over a 95, it would lie within the responses. They are great interpretations and really an amazing piece of work but some very simple grammatical errors or perhaps assumed information do find their way in. This really is a non-problem however since it in now way detracts from your blog as a whole. If I were you, I would perhaps check out the Cape Wind Project for an article. I'm not sure that you will find any recent information but it might be a good place to find some background information. Also, check out what is happening in France as far as nuclear power is concerned and look into Holland for wind power. It might be interesting to find how the governments of these countries have better supported the development of sustainable fuels as compared to America and the Bush Administrations apparent inaction as a whole to the issue.
Samara's response to articles 4, 5, and 6.
Katrina, I feel you are doing very well so far. Your articles are interesting and informing. It sounds like sustainable fuel could make it's way in this country! It would be nice if more people could afford wind and solar energy sources. Obama's plan will be nice to follow through with.
The only thing I can suggest at the moment would be to compile your article clippings into one big paragraph so that it flows easier. Other than that you are doing fine. Keep up the great work!
The only thing I can suggest at the moment would be to compile your article clippings into one big paragraph so that it flows easier. Other than that you are doing fine. Keep up the great work!
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